Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Haiku

Gergors Father
an angry man sits
lazy, sleeping, and alone
he stays for hours

Grete
at home in her room
shes playing the violin
in a melody

Gergor
I am now a bug
with an exoskeleton
raping my body

4 comments:

  1. feed me some good milk
    that taste like rotten garbage
    i dont like that now

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  2. that's really interesting Makenzie, it's a good idea that you went inside every character's head and making a seperate Haiku for each of their roles an their situations.

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  4. are you a big bug
    no i am a big bug now
    we all are big bugs

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