Tuesday, December 9, 2008

Retell the Kafka Story

I have an idea to help get people points and study at the same time. Lets take turns and re-tell the story using haikus only.
Ill start.

"Good morning sunshine."
(I awoke from my long sleep)
"Something feels... different."

23 comments:

  1. Where is my body?
    I have taken a new form
    How did this happen?

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  2. P.S.
    This was a really good idea Brant. Good thinking.

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  3. Maybe I'm drowsy-
    I've traveled a bit too long
    And I needed sleep

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  4. (i looked at the clock)
    Oh my god it is seven!
    i missed my train... crap

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  5. P.S.S i agree with Andrew. this is a fun and creative way to help study and get points back from the weeks we missed blogging!

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  6. But i cant get up
    (i try to get out of bed)
    i need to get up

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  7. I wobbled to the
    Left, and wobbled to the right
    No progress was made

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  8. i think Brant should get an extra blog point for thinking this idea, its fun!

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  9. i agree with everyone here, thanks eveyone

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  10. there is a banging,
    my doors about to cave in.
    "Stop everyone please"

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  11. "Come out here Gregor"
    "Im okay dad, I promise!"
    "What is that strange noise"

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  12. "Call the locksmith here!"
    "Gregor! Gregor this is your boss!"
    "I'll make the next train!"

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  13. "Gregor, it's Grete"
    "Im opening the door now..."
    "AHHHHH! What is that thing!?"

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  14. "Keep it in it's room!
    Let me hit it with this stick!"
    "Dad, it's me Gregor!"

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  15. The story was slow,
    I wrote five parts in a row,
    And gave it more flow.

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  16. i stayed inside of
    here and was under the couch
    i was then brought food

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  17. i did not like the
    milk, it was my favorite
    i ate rotten food

    day by day i hid
    not leaving this room of mine
    now they want to move

    no furniture is
    left in my room just a frame
    of an old lady

    she was an old lady
    with fur and she was all that
    i had left in here

    what was once my own
    is vacant and free to roam
    i want furniture

    the lodgers came in
    today, maybe this will help
    the financial needs

    they listened as she
    played the violin with care
    and she was put down

    my anger rushed through
    me and i had to come out
    of the empty room

    i was then seen by
    the lodgers they were scared of
    my enormous size

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  18. They started to shout
    Seeing me made them upset
    I should have stayed back

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  19. they yell at father
    saying they would not pay up
    for I bothered them

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  20. alone in my room
    i cannot crawl around now
    to many things here

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  21. i am so alone
    my sister has left me too
    yet i still love them

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  22. My dad throws apples,
    The apples hit me with sin.
    One stuck in my back.

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  23. This looks infected.
    I hope it doesnt haunt me...
    Why are there roomers?

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