Love Medicine

Love Medicine
Detail of beadwork from an Ojibwe medicine pouch

Wednesday, February 18, 2009

paper question

my peer editor doesn't think I have any element imagery. Would anyone else like to read my story and discover my water imagery?

3 comments:

Mister Dee said...

Shenanigans. I noticed water imagery, as well as air imagery in your paper

Christine Schmidt said...

I think its good to be subtle with imagery because mine is too obvious and im not sure how to make mine more subtle, do you have any tips?

Jessica Deckard said...

Use words that are suggestive of your motif, but don't hit your reader over the head with very obvious stuff. A little bit here and there goes a long way.